Author: TR
Subject:
HBX April Challenge FF: Arm's Length
I planned this response
to the April 2007 challenge the moment I saw the challenge words. I
just didn’t have the opportunity to write it down until now.
It’s not the best thing I’ve ever written.
THIS
STORY IS SET AT A FUNERAL AND DEALS WITH A DEATH. IT’S NOT
RELATED TO ANYTHING THAT HAS HAPPENED IN THE REAL WORLD WHATSOEVER.
THE DEATH IS NEITHER HARM’S, NOR MAC’S, NOR A CHILD’S.
NOTHING IS GRAPHICLY EXPLAINED OR PORTRAYED. IT’S JUST A
CONVERSATION BETWEEN HARM AND MAC.
This story is set while
Harm is in the CIA. Mac finds out that he’s lost someone close
to him, and is there with him and for him despite the distance
between them.
Honest Feedback is always appreciated.
Arm's
Length
By TR
Mac gathered their drinks and turned from the
refreshment table. Slowly she made her way back to where he was
sitting. In any other circumstance she would have paused to admire
how incredibly good he looked in a dark suit. Today it only served to
remind her of the terrible sadness in the air. Grief had stained his
eyes a brilliant blue. They clashed against the black of his tie.
Against the bright sun that poured through the windows, giving
everything a starkly inappropriate cheerful glow.
He took the
cup from her hand, popped three pills, and took a long swallow. Later
he wouldn’t remember whether it was coffee, tea, or water.
She sat next to him in silence. Sipping something warm and
tasteless. Was it cider? She couldn’t say.
She saw him
rotate his shoulder, still in a sling. Wince.
“How’s
it feeling?”
He shrugged and winced again. “I just
took some pain meds, they should kick in by the time I have to lift
the cask...” His voiced faded out on a whisper.
“Maybe
you shouldn’t...”
He looked up sharply, eyes
glistening, jaw quivering. “My mother carried me into this
world. I’m going to carry her out!”
Mac softened
her voice. “I wasn’t going to suggest otherwise. I was
going to say, maybe you shouldn’t move it around so much.
You’re adjusting your arm every few minutes. That can’t
be helping.”
“I know, I just hate this thing.”
He picked up the strap of the sling and slid it a millimeter from
it’s original position. Pretending that made it better. He ran
his free hand through his hair. “I keep thinking. Why didn’t
I call more? Why didn’t I want to call more? I loved her, but I
just couldn’t bring myself to say it. Why couldn’t I say
it?”
Mac waited a beat. “We’ve gotten too
good at saying goodbye. We both have. We’re so used to losing
people that we keep them at arms length hoping that it will soften
the blow when it finally happens.”
‘It didn’t
work.”
“It never does.”
“I
don’t think anything could soften this blow. Not when I could
have done more...”
She reached out, stroked his good
shoulder. “Harm there’s no sense in beating yourself up
over it now. Your mother understood you, probably better than anyone
else. I’m sure you’re forgiven.”
“I
hope so.” He took a deep breath, centered himself, and turned
to her. “Do you understand me Mac?”
She paused
momentarily in surprise. “Love you, yes. Understand you?
No.”
He gaped. “I can’t believe you just
said that. Especially after...”
“Would you rather
I sit at your funeral wondering why I could never say it? Arms length
doesn’t do any good if it’s going to make us feel this
way in the end. I’m paying my respects while you’re
sitting here in front of me to hear them. Just as you did every time
you hugged your mom, every time you did tell her you loved her, even
if you were a child the last time she heard it. She knew you loved
her. And now you know I love you.”
He was moved beyond
words. Comforted beyond measure.
“I love you, too,”
He whispered, swallowing the lump in his throat back down into this
belly. “When I can think again. Put one foot in front of the
other...we can deal with this. With “us”. If that’s
okay.”
She gestured to their surroundings. “This
isn’t about us today. It shouldn’t be about us. That much
I understand. The rest can be sorted out when it’s time.”
His
eyes warmed. “Okay.”
He stood, as the music
changed. Moved into place next to the mahogany casket. She gave his
arm a squeeze, his cheek a kiss, his heart a boost, then moved to
take her place beside his, in the front row of the chapel.
End
of scene. Good? Bad? Onychomycosis? Let me know.