Author: keru
Subject:
HBX Challenge August 2008 - Stuck in an Elevator
Disclaimer:
Don't own'em.
A/N: I've had this crazy tough week, consider
this my form of stress relief. I really enjoy all those 'stuck in the
elevator' fics. So you can also consider this as my tribute to those
stories and their writers. I don't know anything about elevators
except that they usually get me to my floor so this is probably
completely unrealistic, but that's okay: I don't mind if you don't.
Also, the song is "Nothing's Gonna Stop Us Now" by
Jefferson Starship. I wasn't about to use Flo Rida's "Elevator"
– that's just too nasty, regardless of the suitability of the
title...
I hope to have the sequel to 'Conversations' done in
the next couple of weeks, fingers crossed.
--
Stuck
in an Elevator
Mac breezed through the doors of JAG, with
a smile and a thanks for the young Ensign who held the door for her,
and walked right into a waiting elevator. She pressed the button for
the third floor, and gave a satisfied sigh.
This had been one
of those mornings where everything was going her way. The cute
barista at the coffee shop near her place had offered her a free
muffin with her coffee. She'd hit only green lights at every traffic
signal she'd crossed. Traffic on the beltway had been mercifully
light. She'd had a fat tax refund direct deposited into her bank
account, just waiting for her when she'd logged in this morning. And
her cell phone company had actually admitted to overcharging her in
an early morning message on her answering machine. And now the
elevator was just waiting for her, when usually the morning rush
meant at least a four minute wait.
And how could she forget
the very warm, very ... Mac sighed dreamily, and decided there was no
word to describe how very very the man she'd woken up to
was...
To think, she'd told herself years ago that she was no
longer the kind to take a guy home just because he asked—
The
elevator jerked suddenly, wrenching Mac from her thoughts. She
grabbed for the railings behind her, trying to find her balance. She
felt her previous good humour fade somewhat when the elevator simply
stopped moving, and the lights flickered for three seconds before
deciding to do her a favour by remaining lit.
Figures, Mac
thought as she picked up the emergency phone. She gave whichever god
was pulling the strings today points for execution. Her morning truly
had been too good to be true.
The emergency phone rang for
eight whole rings before it occurred to Mac that the phone wasn’t
being attended to.
Mac counted to ten, and tried not to lose
that wonderful mood she'd been in just moments ago.
She hung
up, waited a beat, picked up the receiver, and tried again.
Ten
rings, and still nothing. She hung up. Mac checked her cell phone,
but there was no signal.
"I would've sat through a few
red lights, if I'd known the trade-off," She muttered.
She
picked up the phone, and tried again. At the eleventh ring,
mercifully, the line connected.
"Maintenance."
"I'm
stuck in the elevator," Mac said, figuring preamble was not
necessary at this point.
There was a pause.
"Which
elevator, Ma'am?"
Mac rolled her eyes. "First one on
the right, when you face the doors."
Another
pause.
"Just a second, Ma'am."
It took him a
lot more than one second, but Mac kept that to herself. She leaned
against the wood paneled wall, and tried not to tap her foot with
impatience as she waited.
"Ma'am," Another voice
came on the line. "My name is Barry. Are you alright?"
"Yes,
I'm fine, Barry."
"Great, great." Barry said.
"Can you see a number on the top left corner of the elevator,
just above the door?"
Mac squinted up in the direction he
was indicating. "Yes, number three."
"Alright,
I'm going to have a team come take a look."
"You
can't tell if there's a malfunction from where you are?"
"Sorry,
Ma'am. Everything seems to be in order here."
"How
long will this take?" She crossed her fingers.
"I
can't say, Ma'am."
"Educated guess, Barry."
Exasperation was winning out.
"At least a half hour,
Ma'am."
"Wonderful." She muttered, then added,
"Can you call Admiral AJ Chegwidden, he's the JAG. Extension
4228. Please tell him Colonel MacKenzie is stuck in the elevator and
might be late for our meeting. My cell's not working in here."
"I
can do that for you, Colonel."
"Thank you,
Barry."
"You just ring if you need anything."
Mac
hung up the phone, and sat down on the floor, leaning back against
the wall.
Just great.
If she'd known she would've been
stuck in an elevator for thirty minutes, she would've just stayed in
bed a while longer this morning ... Mac lost herself for a little
while thinking of what she could've accomplished in that bed in half
an hour, given the man in bed with her, before bringing herself back
to the present.
Oh, well. Might as well make the most of this.
Mac opened her briefcase and took out the paperwork she'd intended to
work on last night before she'd been given a much better offer. In a
bar, of all places. To think she'd also told herself years ago that
she was no longer the kind to pick up guys in bars. Mac bit her lip
to contain her grin, and put her mind to work.
Fifteen minutes
and fourteen seconds later, the emergency phone started ringing,
startling Mac out of the file she was reading. She reached over to
pick up the phone.
"Yes?"
"Colonel
MacKenzie, this is Barry. I'm just checking in."
"Hey,
Barry. I'm doing fine, thanks." She idly wondered what Barry
looked like. He sounded ... solid. "Did you have a chance to
call the admiral?"
"Yes. He was fine with it once he
was sure you were okay." Barry answered.
"Thank you,
Barry. Do you have an update on the situation?"
"My
crew is taking a look. They're not quite sure what the problem is.
Which floor were you heading for?"
"Third
floor."
"Hm." Came the unhelpful response. "I
just got a page on the other line, Ma'am, from my crew. I'll let you
go."
"Nowhere to go to, Barry." She sighed.
"I'll be right here."
With that, they both
disconnected.
Mac picked up the file in front of her, signed
where it was required and slid the file back into her
briefcase.
That was all the work she had on her. Mac looked
around the elevator, but distraction was hard to come by in a
rectangular box. Mac stretched her legs out, and wished she'd worn
pants instead of a skirt. But who dresses for the eventuality of
being stuck in an elevator?
Mac looked up at the ceiling, and
remembered how Chloe had hidden up there once. Worse come to worse,
she did have an escape route. She debated pushing over the ceiling
panel just to see what was up there – it had to be more
exciting than what was in here – when the elevator jerked
downwards, and then came to a halt. Mac braced herself against the
wall, and then stood up. She smoothed her skirt with shaking hands,
and picked up the emergency phone.
Barry picked up after six
rings.
"Colonel?"
"Yes. Everything okay
there, Barry?"
He hesitated, which was enough of an
answer for her. She consoled herself with the fact that the building
only had three floors. She couldn't plummet to her death from such a
low height, could she?
"Fine, Ma'am. Just a minor ...
hiccup."
Mac almost laughed, except her worry won out.
"Your crew does know what they're doing, right?"
"Of
course, Ma'am," He was quick to defend.
"Just making
sure, Barry." She placated.
"Well, Ma'am." He
faltered. "Since you are the one inside the elevator, you should
know we have this new guy..." He trailed off, and Mac actually
felt the blood drain from her face.
She looked down at the
floor, and tried to imagine how far down the bottom of the elevator
shaft was. JAG HQ did have a basement after all. Four floors? That
didn't kill people, did it?
This was not something they
covered in Marine training.
"I'm just kidding, Ma'am."
Barry said, following Mac's extended silence. And she realized that
he was actually chuckling.
"Christ, Barry," Mac
started breathing again, immeasurably relieved. She decided Barry in
Maintenance had a dysfunctional sense of humour. "Did you miss
the day they were giving sensitivity training?" She laughed
weakly.
Barry laughed merrily. "Don't worry, Ma'am. Have
to entertain myself somehow. There is a failsafe mechanism installed.
The elevator won't drop more than five feet before the gear kicks in
and stops it."
"Good to know. You know where to find
me." She hung up the phone, and sat back down. Mac waited for
her heart beat to normalize, before searching out some form of
diversion in her little cage.
Her gaze drifted back to the
ceiling. Were security cameras installed in these elevators, she
wondered. She wasn't sure, so Mac amused herself for the next ten
minutes by trying to see if she could detect any telltale signs of
camera presence.
It was a very long ten minutes.
She
was about to pick up the phone just so she could cut through her
boredom by chatting with Barry, when Mac remembered that she had her
nail file and buffer in her purse.
No time like the present.
She removed the items and started filing her nails.
Sixteen
minutes later, she was filed and buffed – she could admit that
she'd never spent so much time on her nails before – and once
again a bit bored. And fed up.
Just then, the phone
rang.
"Barry," She said, picking up the receiver.
"Please give me some good news."
"At your
service, Colonel," He replied with good humour. "We don't
know what's wrong with the elevator, but my crew finally managed to
override the system. We're going to take you back to the ground
floor, and you can get off the elevator. Someone from my crew will be
there to block off the car, so no one else can get on. You can use
any of the other cars to head to the third floor, Ma'am."
"I'll
take the stairs, thanks." Mac answered. "And thank you,
Barry, and your crew."
"Sorry for the inconvenience,
Ma'am."
Mac hung up the receiver and stood up, just as
the lift started moving downwards. She quickly straightened her
clothes, picked up her things, and readied herself to get the hell
off this stupid box.
The elevator light dinged, the doors slid
open.
Freedom. Fresh Air. Finally.
Mac nodded at the
technician standing off to the side.
"You'll block this
off," she asked, holding the door open with a hand.
"Yes,
Ma'am. At the control box." He nodded towards a grey panel on
the far wall of the elevator lobby. "If you could just hold the
door for me, for a moment?"
"Sure thing." She
figured she should also make sure no one else got in; the technician
seemed rather disinterested in his work.
Mac held the door as
the technician unlocked the control box. She admired her nails while
waiting.
Her attention was drawn to the front lobby when the
doors to the building suddenly swung open, and a flash of white
whipped through the entrance, heading straight for her.
It was
Harm and – Mac checked her internal clock – he was
running late.
"Hold the elevator!" Harm called,
running at a quick clip towards her, flashing her his grin. He was
too fast for either her or the technician to react, and he jumped
into the elevator, pulling her hand away from holding the doors as he
did so.
"Thank for holding the door, Mac. Would hate to
be late for the staff meeting." He winked, hit the button for
the third floor, and then impatiently and repeatedly jabbed the close
door button, before she could even get in a word edgewise.
"Harm!"
She yelled as her wits finally found her. "No!"
She
dropped whatever was in her hands, lunged forward, and put a hand out
to stop the door. To her utter surprise and frustration, the
automatic sensor wasn't doing its job, and door kept sliding shut.
She tried to push the door open with both hands and the entire
strength of her body, while Harm – useless lout – just
stood there and stared at her. She finally had to concede defeat to
the damn can of steel and wood, and removed her hands just before the
door shut.
She was pretty sure she was going to cry.
She
should have stepped out of the elevator to hold the doors. She was
such an idiot.
Despair was replaced with anger as she
remembered that Harm was the reason for her current predicament. She
ground her teeth, and turned to face him.
--
Harm could
only stare in wonder as Mac stared at the elevator doors, looking
like her world had just ended. He would've laughed at the sight she
made, if not for the fact that he was really confused.
Before
he could ask after her, she turned on him with a really, really
terrifying scowl in place.
"You." She said, full of
menace.
Harm frowned. He was trying to think of what to say,
when the elevator jerked to a sudden stop. Mac shut her eyes, and
hung her head in defeat.
What on earth was wrong with
her?
"It's okay, Mac," He soothed. "There's an
emergency phone in here. I'm sure it's nothing."
Instead
of appeasing her, the menace in her expression increased tenfold.
Harm took a step backward, purely out of self-preservation.
Just
then, the emergency phone rang.
Harm picked up the receiver,
only because he was closer.
"Hello?"
There
was a silence on the other end, before a male voice tentatively
asked, "Is Colonel MacKenzie there?"
Harm stared at
the receiver, and then at Mac.
"It's ... for you?"
She
grabbed the phone from him in a violent jerk, and put the phone to
her ear. The ferocious glare she was directing at him did not
abate.
"Yes, Barry?" She ground out.
Harm was
now most definitely confused. She was on a first name basis with the
emergency phone guy?
She listened intently, and then shut her
eyes. Her fingers reached up to massage her temple.
"I
tried, Barry. I tried to get out. Your technician was opening the
control box for the elevator, and I was holding the door to make sure
no one got in while he did it, when," Here, Mac took a deep
breath, and once again glared at Harm. "When..."
She
seemed to be at a loss for words, and gave up trying. She listened as
Barry said something to her.
"Thanks, Barry," She
heaved a dejected sigh. "And Barry, can you call the admiral
again? Tell him I'll be further delayed. And tell him it's the
Commander's fault. He'll know exactly who you're talking about."
She
walked up to Harm, standing toe-to-toe with him. She looked him
straight in the eye as she replaced the receiver into its box.
"You
are a moron." She said, and then turned on her heel and sat down
heavily against the opposite wall of the elevator, as far from him as
he thought was possible.
He tried disarming her with a smile,
not exactly sure how it was his fault that the elevator
malfunctioned.
"C'mon, Mac. You, me, an elevator..."
He trailed off, and raised an eyebrow suggestively. He took a step
towards her.
She made a sound that was alarmingly like a
snarl, and it stopped him dead in his tracks.
"I've been
stuck in here for 42 minutes and 18 seconds, Harmon Rabb. They just
got me out. And you," She jabbed one slender finger in his
direction, "Got me stuck again."
"42 minutes?"
He asked, alarmed.
"And now 26 seconds." She crossed
her arms over her chest as she looked up at him. "And
counting."
"Mac, geez." He sympathized, and
took another step towards her. "That's terrible."
"You
are not allowed to talk to me." She warned, straightening up
where she sat.
He laughed at her bluster.
"And
wipe that smile off your face. Why the hell are you in such a good
mood? We're stuck in a damned elevator." She was all bristly and
irritable.
To his credit he did stop laughing, but he could
not hide his amusement at seeing her so put off.
"Well,"
He decided to needle her even further. This mood of hers had always
been a weak spot for him. "I'm in a good mood because I had this
really hot date last night."
Her scowl deepened,
and her jaw tightened. There was a clear warning in her eyes.
"Want
to hear about it?" He asked conversationally, ignoring her
reaction.
She didn't say anything, so he sat down next to
her, by her left side.
She shifted away from him, and turned
her head to stare at the wall on her right.
He was having such
fun with her, he thought happily.
He slid closer to her, and
she moved again still not looking in his direction. He again followed
her. They continued this until she was sidled up against the wall
with nowhere to go, and he was sitting close enough to her that their
hips and shoulders were touching.
He grinned. She ignored
him.
"So ... my hot date," He nudged her shoulder
with his. "You should've seen her."
She emitted a
very unpleasant huff, and he chuckled.
"I picked her up
at a bar," He watched her reaction, and thought that he'd never
before smiled so much before noon. "And asked her if we could go
to her place."
"She shouldn't have said yes."
Mac said petulantly. She was still looking in the opposite
direction.
"Actually," Harm gave free reign to his
arrogance, and leaned in towards her ear. "I didn't give her
reason to regret it."
She turned to face him, at those
words.
"You didn't," She bit her lip, and he saw a
range of very satisfying emotions flicker in her eyes. His ego was
patting itself on the back, until he realized just how close he was
sitting to her.
His gaze dropped to her lips, then flitted
back up to her eyes. Her breathing was shallow; she was waiting for
his next move. He gave in to the devil inside him, and leaned in to
kiss her when she suddenly turned away.
"But I'm still
stuck in this damn elevator – again – because of
you." She declared, and went back to ignoring him.
Well,
they didn't call him Charmin' Harmon in flight school for
nothing.
He wondered if Mac had ever been serenaded before. He
hoped not: he was taking out the big guns.
He hummed a bar.
When he was sure that he had Mac's attention, even though she wasn't
looking at him, he leaned forward to catch her eye, and began
singing.
"Looking in your eyes, I see a paradise. This
world that I've found is too good to be true..."
He heard
her stifle her laughter when she recognized the song, and his grin
widened uncontrollably.
"Sitting here beside you..."
She
rolled her eyes at the word he substituted in the original.
"...want
so much to give you this love in my heart that I'm feeling for
you..."
That got her attention, just as he thought it
would. Did he know how to melt a woman, or what. She turned to look
at him with an expression of awed tenderness, and he knew at this
moment she was wearing her heart on her sleeve.
It was
irresistible. He swallowed heavily, and took a deep breath trying to
level himself.
It was no use.
He leaned forward to
kiss her.
"Harm!" She exclaimed, stopping him
midway. Her eyes darted around the car. She looked distinctly
uncomfortable, as she pointed towards the ceiling. "There might
be cameras in here."
He seriously doubted that, what with
all the budget cutbacks.
"Let'em say we're crazy,"
He sang the next verse, and threw a dismissive glance up at the
panelled ceiling even though he was sure there were no cameras, "I
don't care about that," He waggled his eyebrow at her. "Just
put your hand in my hand, baby," He held out a hand, and waited
for her to take it.
She didn't, instead glancing up at the
ceiling with worry.
She could be so stubborn he thought,
laughing.
"Put your hand in my hand, baby," He
repeated. He nudged her, and shook his hand slightly in front of
her.
She slowly put her hand on his, and he saw the smile she
was trying hard to contain. Her eyes sparkled with a slightly
self-conscious amusement.
He wrapped his fingers tightly
around her hand, pulled her closer into him, and looked her in the
eye. He was having so much fun with her.
He belted out the
next line with renewed vigour. "Don't ever look ba-a-aack."
The
elevator jerked suddenly, and he could only laugh as he sang the next
words.
"Let the world around us," He indicated the
elevator walls with a sweep of his hands, "Just fall apart.
Baby, we can make it if we're heart to heart."
She
finally laughed out loud, without reserve. He felt her body relax
next to his.
"Alright, alright." She said, one hand
up in surrender, the other still held in his. "You win."
She
favoured him with a warm, teasing look.
"Hot date, huh?"
She tugged his hand.
"You know it." He answered, and
tried really hard not to give in to the urge to kiss her. Holding her
hand in the JAG elevator was one thing, but they both knew making out
was an altogether different matter.
He placed their clasped
hands on his lap, and leaned back against the wall. He turned his
head to look at her, and continued singing since there really wasn't
much else to do when stranded in a JAG elevator.
"And we
can build this thing together, standing strong forever, nothing's
gonna stop us now..."
She joined him in the chorus,
laughing as she did so, and his heart swelled. They're words were
almost unintelligible as they tried to contain their amusement.
"And
if this world runs out of lovers, we'll still have each other!"
They sang merrily. "Nothing's gonna stop us!"
She
burst into gales of laughter, while he couldn't wipe the grin off his
face.
"Thanks," She told him, a hand on his thigh.
"I needed that. This morning was going great until I stepped
into this damn box."
His response was cut off by the
phone ringing. He stood up to answer.
"Yes?"
"Sir,
this is Barry with Maintenance."
"Hi, Barry. What's
the status?" He watched Mac straighten her skirt as she sat
against the wall. He imagined what it would be like to slowly remove
that uniform, one layer at a time. Maybe tonight...
"We're
looking at another 45 minutes," Barry said.
"What?!"
Harm exclaimed. "That long?"
"Sorry,
Sir."
Harm put his hand over the mouthpiece.
"45
minutes," He told a questioning Mac. Her face fell, and she
swore richly.
"We'll do our best to hurry it up,
Sir."
"Thanks, Barry," He hung up the phone,
and turned to look at Mac.
"I really am sorry, Mac."
He apologized.
She shrugged, giving him a sweet smile.
"Don't
worry about it, Harm: I got my first serenade out of it."
He
watched her, and couldn't help but feel bad about this predicament.
He glanced at the ceiling, and a rather brilliant solution occurred.
"We're stuck between the first and second floors,
right?" He asked, and waited for her nod. He again looked up at
the panelled ceiling. "So we can get out through there and use
the manual override to open the doors."
"Are you
kidding?" She asked, following his gaze.
"If Chloe
could get up there, I'm sure two trained military officers can."
He
reached up and pushed the panel aside.
She joined him, and
they both looked up through the hole.
"The elevator is
hardly stable." She cautioned.
"It'll be fine, Mac."
He dismissed her worry. One jerk did not an unstable elevator
make.
She wasn't convinced. "Barry said the elevator
could drop up to five feet before the safety mechanism kicks
in."
"You seem to on pretty good terms with Barry,"
He commented.
She gave him a withering glance. "He
doesn’t trap me in elevators."
"That's because
he doesn't recognize a good opportunity when he sees it." He
teased her, to prevent her from going back to ignoring him.
She
gave a low laugh he recognized from last night. "Thank god for
the cameras. Otherwise you'd have peeled this uniform off me ages
ago."
"Don't tempt me," He laughed nervously,
if only to cover how close that was to his earlier fantasy. She
really wasn't playing fair, and from the look on her face, she knew
it. He cleared his throat and went back to solving their
quandary.
"I think the best way to do this, is for me to
give you a boost, and you to pull me through." Harm said, after
a few moments deliberation.
"Alright." She said with
resignation, as she removed her pumps.
She hesitated as he
laced his fingers together and crouched down to offer her a
lift.
"You're not going to look up my skirt are you?"
Her lip curled in a mischievous smile.
He grinned, and gave
her a roguish wink. "Nothing I haven't seen before."
They
laughed as she put her foot on his joined hands, and her hands on his
shoulders.
He liked how delicate her hands felt there. And
even her feet were soft; he noticed how shiny her toenails were, and
wondered if that was natural.
"Ready?"
"Ready."
She confirmed.
He pushed his hands to give her a boost, just
as the elevator heeded her fears and gave a sudden jerk. He ended up
missing his aim, and sent her into the elevator wall.
"Harm!"
She cried, as her shoulder connected with the wood that covered the
four sides of the carriage, and her hip with the railing.
They
both fell to the ground at opposite ends of the elevator, though she
looked like she was in more pain.
"Ouch," She said
viciously, as she tried to catch her breath. She rubbed her
shoulder.
"You okay?" He asked, contrite.
"Maybe
it works better if you put your arms around me." She said, after
they sat recovering for a few moments.
"Are you sure you
want to try again?" He asked, re-evaluating the merits of his
brilliant plan.
"This was your idea." She glared at
him. "I said it was stupid. So we're going to follow it
through."
He wondered if she actually saw some logic in
her statement, somewhere. And he didn’t recall hearing her say
it was a stupid idea.
"It'll work better if you put your
arms around me," She insisted.
He broke into a grin when
he realized how apt her words were.
"Put your arms around
me baby, don't ever let go-oh-o." He sang another line of the
song that had worked such wonders on her before.
It did the
trick yet again, and she laughed. She shook her head at him, but her
eyes were full of a contented affection.
"Maybe we should
just wait," They both said at the same time, and then
chuckled.
He moved to sit next to her.
"How much
time left?" He asked.
"39 minutes, 13 seconds and
counting." She answered.
That long.
He glanced at
her, as she made herself comfortable next to him, and remembered how
gorgeous she'd looked when he'd caught sight of her at McMurphy's
last night, how amazing she'd felt while they'd danced together, how
sweet she'd smelled when he'd kissed her, how she'd made those
incredible sounds when he'd...
"So, hot date," He
turned to face her, flyboy grin in place, "Want to come to my
place tonight?"
--
end.