Author: TR
Subject:
Feb. FF Challenge. The Story Tree
This is set after
they've moved to San Diego. Before the wedding. It's a hot summer day
in a secluded place.
The challenge words for this month called for
something funny. But I found it more of a challenge to put them into
something that wasn't funny. Don't worry, not "unfunny"
either. Just not a comedy piece. I hope I remembered all of the lines
and put them in.
This is unbetaed, and unedited. All mistakes
are my own.
The story tree
by TR
"I love this
tree."
"I thought you might."
"I
love the ripples in the bark. And the knots. It's...got stories."
I
nod. Pull her closer. "It does."
"So this is
your place?"
"This is my place." I confirm.
Shift my face to avoid a stray curl of her hair that seems insistent
on feather dusting my eye. I adjust my back on the blanket, feel the
roots, thick with age, that curl and twist in a protective cove
around the trunk. Around us. "I came here when I was a kid,
after I found out that my mom was going to marry Frank. I sat right
in this spot and felt...comforted somehow. Like everything would work
out in it's own time."
"Have you been here
since?"
I nod. "Every time I felt lost. When
I...didn't know the next part of my story. I'd come and look at the
roots, the branches, and wonder about all the things they've seen.
Things that were so much bigger than whether my mom would get
married, or whether I'd fly again. Or whether I'd ever know if you
loved me."
She lifts her head, meets my eyes. "Harm
I've always..."
"I know." I give her what I
hope is a smile of reassurance. "I know now."
Satisfied
she lies back down, rests her head on my arm. Studies the tangle of
branches above us. I've learned so much about this woman in the past
few weeks. Her mind never stops working. Even when she's asleep it's
running full speed. Her eyes gleam even now with the ideas forming
behind them, and I feel an ache in my chest knowing that even if I
live to be a 150 years old, I'll never have enough time to hear all
of her stories.
"This is the most important place to
me." I continue. "You're the only one I've ever brought
here. The only one who knows about it."
She smiles and
snuggles close, kisses my jaw. "Thank you," she
whispers.
"You're worth it." I tell her. Then let
her go long enough to reach for my pants, that are now lying a few
feet away. "This is a place where important things happen."
I lift the ring box from my pocket, toss my pants back into the
unruly heap of clothing. "That's why I wanted to give you this
here." I lean on my side. Facing her. "Mac, I wanted to do
this here because I know that there will never be another time, when
I will feel lost, when I won't know the next part of my story,
because my life will be full of you, as it has been for so many
years."
She accepts the ring I hold out to her, slides it
onto her finger without words. None are needed. The love in her lips,
her eyes, her touch is enough.
We lie down, and her eyes once
again rest on the branches spreading out above us, like the arms of
the old and wise. She lifts her left hand, watching the ring glow in
the afternoon sun. Moves her arm. Closes one eye, then the other.
Moves again. Raises and lowers her hand fractions of an inch. I'm
about to ask what she's doing when she speaks.
"It has a
new story," She says softly.
"A new story?"
"Us.
We made love under this tree, you gave me this ring. You've come here
alone so many times before. But now with me. Long after we're gone
that story will be here."
"And will it tell our
story?"
"It already is."
I frown.
She
explains. "Look at those branches up there."
"Which
ones?"
"Those two." She points, scoots over so
that I can follow and see. "Those ones are us."
"I
don't know which..."
She turns my chin, points again. "Oh
come on Harm. Those two bent ones. They're...kinky. You see
them?"
"Kinky?" She elbows me. In a 'be
serious' gesture. I relent. "I see them. Those are us?"
"Yes.
See how they are growing close together, then curve away from each
other only to bend close again. There are lots of sharp angles there.
Like some unseen force had pushed them together, only to pull them
apart. They worked hard to touch. Just once, but they never quite
made it until now. The ends are barely curled together. But tight
enough that there's no doubt that they'll never be apart again. Just
like us. When we're gone, another lost soul will find this tree, and
they'll just know that there's a reason those branches are together
that way." She smiles and drops her gaze. Looks simultaneously
embarrassed and adorable. "That's what I think anyway."
I
give her a squeeze. "I think you're right. Maybe we should get
married here."
Our eyes meet and we immediately throw out
the idea . "On second thought, let's not. This place isn't for a
crowd."
"No, it's not." I agree. "Though I
have decided I'd like to be buried here. That's probably something
you need to know, in case..."
She stiffens against me.
"Yellow light Rabb."
I frown. "Haven't we
reached the point where we can drop the traffic signals?"
The
possessive hand that's been resting on my chest slides to my side,
becoming a protective shield. "Not when you talk about dying.
You don't get to die on me."
I turn my head, kiss her
temple. "I'll do my best."
She relaxes again, "I
really love you, you know."
I nod. "And I think
you're amazing."
She shakes her head. "I'm just an
ordinary woman Harm."
I laugh in incredulity. "There
is NOTHING ordinary about you. There never has been. You are
amazing."
"Oh really, and what is so amazing about
me. Besides my fiance'?"
"Did I tell you why a
female Marine is like the Energizer Bunny?"
She's
laughing, and doesn't even have to ask what I'm talking about. "You
think I'm amazing because I can have multiple
orgasms?"
"Absolutely."
"It's not
that uncommon Harm. I admit I never realized I had that particular
gift until you decided to test the theory on me, but it's not unheard
of. Besides it makes perfect sense."
"Oh do tell,"
I say against her neck as I start kissing her.
She shrugs,
then sighs as reach the spot behind her ear. "It's just nature
evening the score."
"Evening the score?" I ask,
only have interested in the answer.
"Nature always evens
the score. Do you have to go through pregnancy and labor?"
This
catches my attention. "No I don't. I'm sorry I can't do that
part for you."
"No you can't. So you get your one
orgasm, while we female types do have to go through it, so we have
unlimited orgasm potential. It all...um...mmmm...right there...um
makes perfect sense to me."
"Me too," I say.
"Perfect sense." I gather her close, roll her body under
mine. "How about we test your "potential" right
now."
She smiles. "Right here in front of the tree.
It might tell our secrets."
"I'm counting on it."
I tell her. 'If I'm going to lie buried here forever, I want to
remember this.' This thought I keep to myself, as I kiss her mouth,
and begin another chapter of our story.
End of scene. Good?
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