Author: TR
Subject:
HBX November 2007 Challenge FF: Honesty is the best fallacy?
This
story is written in response to the HBX November 2007 Challenge.
It’s a small scene set right after Critical
Condition.
Mac feels that Harm is troubled and comes to lend a
listening ear. She gets more than she bargained for.
I don’t
own JAG, but if I did I would have shown the conversation that Harm
and Mac obviously had before he returned to work in Back in the
Saddle.
Honesty is the best fallacy?
By TR
He looked
exactly the way she imagined he would when she found him. Sitting
behind his desk, staring at a piece of official looking paper.
Worries, and thoughts, and questions wrapping, swirling around him
like an ever-moving shroud in the silence of the room. His eyes were
open and distant, and the deep blue that meant sadness.
“Harm,”
she said it softly, but he still jumped in his seat. Fumbling then
catching the document. He recovered his balance long enough to slip
the paper underneath the pile of folders on his desk before she had
time to see what it was.
“Hey Mac, I didn’t know
you were still here.”
She nodded. “Yeah, I have a
few things to finish up before the long weekend. I was almost
finished but you were thinking too loudly for me to concentrate.
“
His mouth quirked, and he let out a long slow sigh.
“Sorry about that.” He gestured to the open file on his
desk. “It’s this case. Has me all...wrapped up.”
She
cocked her head to the side and studied him for a long moment before
she stepped into the office. Taking a seat she leaned forward and
placed her clasped hands on the surface of the desk. “You want
to talk about it? My best friend told me one time that I’m a
pretty good listener. At least...about work.” When that didn’t
earn her the smile she was expecting she frowned in concern.
His
voice was low, thoughtful. “I...I don’t know if I want to
talk about it. I just wonder about the choices that people make in
their lives. The words they tell other people just to save them the
mess of breaking someone’s heart, and the things they actually
feel, deep down, that they never put into words.” He rubbed his
hands over his eyes, paused looking at her through his fingers. Then
slowly dropped them to the desk. He flicked his finger up and down
just barely brushing the edge of the folder. She watched the movement
and wondered if he knew how much it reminded her of a cat tapping the
end of his tail against the floor. The tapping stopped and he looked
up.
“Maybe you’re not the right person to talk to
about this.”
She frowned. “Why not?”
For
the life of him he couldn’t figure out how to explain it. He
could see that she was taken aback. Almost...offended. Or...maybe not
sure if she should be.
“It’s you... I mean it’s
me...talking to you. I mean this subject...” He took a deep
breath, regrouped. “Talking to you about this subject isn’t
something that I’ve been very successful with in the
past.”
She sat back. Folded her arms protectively in
front of her. Raised an eyebrow. “But weren’t you just
talking about this case? How does that have to do with...
you...and....me?”
He almost smiled at the mix of
challenge and genuine question in her voice. “Mac...doesn’t
everything we say come back ‘round to you...and....me?”
She
smiled, and folded her hands once more. “Yes it does. But this
doesn’t have to. If this case is bothering you, I can put this
*thing* with us to the side, and listen objectively.”
He
shifted in his seat. “You know...thanks anyway Mac, but I don’t
know if there’s really anything more to say about it. I
appreciate you offering to listen though.”
Her eyes
narrowed as she watched him. Her voice was soft, but steady. “Are
you declining because you have feelings you can’t put into
words, or are you just trying not to break my heart?”
“Both,
I guess. Look, I’m sorry Mac. I don’t have my head on
straight right now.”
She turned away, but only long
enough to shut the door. “What is it Harm? Just tell me. We
used to be able to talk about anything. We used to be best
friends.”
“We are!”
“Then I
want the truth. If you don’t really want to talk about
whatever’s bothering you about this case, then fine. I can
respect that. But don’t keep it inside because you’re
afraid of how I’ll react, or...of hurting me. I’m here as
your friend now. Nothing more, nothing less. If you need to talk
about it, we’ll talk about it.”
He warred with
himself, fought the urge to get up and pace as they stared each other
down. “I’m not sure how you’ll take the
truth.”
“Try me.”
“Okay.”
He took a deep preparatory breath. Slowly he turned the open file for
her to read it. Her brow creased in concentration, as she leaned in
reading the documents. “You’re working on a will?”
“On
the side. For a friend. He lived next door to us in California when I
was a kid. I used to hide out in an old tree house he had on his
property after Dad went missing.”
She smiled in
acknowledgement, but didn’t respond otherwise. After reading
through a few of the pages, she looked up, confused. “I can see
how this would be difficult for you, he was your friend, but...how
does this have anything to do with us...or the choices people
make...?”
He directed her to the last page of the will.
“He had no family of his own. Never married. He left his
considerable fortune to Betty.”
‘Betty?”
Harm
pointed to the name on the page. “Note her address.”
“It’s
one number away from his.”
He nodded. “She lived
next door to him, on the other side, for the better part of 50 years.
50 years Mac. They were friends. Confidants. Occasional adversaries.
Part of each other’s lives.” He picked up an envelope
that had been part of the file. “He left this letter for her,
to be read to her, as she was blinded in an accident 20 years ago. He
could have written it in Braille, but the instructions say that it is
to be read aloud. I can’t help but think there’s a reason
for that Mac. A reason that goes beyond him and Betty.”
“Have
you read it?” She asked softly.
“I have.
He...loved her. Almost from the beginning when they were still young
enough to settle down and make a life together, he loved her.”
“And this has you wondering about his choices?”
“About
all of our choices. He never told her. 50 years and he never told
her. How...absolutely FUBAR is that? She has to hear it in a letter
after he’s gone.”
She was quiet for a long time.
Thinking. Regretting. Hoping. She watched as Harm gathered the
documents and closed the folder.
“And you think you’ve
been given this task for a reason?”
He nodded. “I
imagine we all go out with things left unsaid, but it should never be
something like that, something so vital to the man he was. She was
vital to his life. She should have known what she meant to him.”
He sighed. “Anyway, it got me thinking. Hard. And when I think
hard you tend to show up in my doorway. Sorry I was disturbing your
work.”
“Don’t be. This is definitely more
important.” She frowned in confusion. “Harm, why were you
unsure how I would react to this?”
“Because I
haven’t told you everything. It’s hard to tell you, given
our history, and the fact that you are my best friend....But you said
you were here in “friend” capacity so that makes it a
little easier. A little. I...Mac...I have to know. When you told me
you loved me too the night of your engagement party, were you just
saving yourself the mess of breaking my heart, or...?”
“No,
I meant it,” she confessed in a near whisper. “I’m
sorry I didn’t act on it after the party, there was just too
much...”
He raised a hand putting an end to her
apologies. He seemed relieved and...more by her answer. “I
meant what I said too. Mac I’m still....” He ran a hand
through his hair, and just couldn’t seem to get it out.
Mac
watched his eyes and her trepidation and hope grew exponentially. She
stayed in her seat. Tried to remain calm, though it nearly killed her
to do so. She set her jaw. ‘Come on Colonel, you’re a
Marine, fight like one. Even if you are fighting the urge to leap
over the desk into his arms and forcibly tack, staple, duck tape and
super glue the words ‘in love with you’ onto the end of
the sentence he’d started. Stand your ground Marine. He may
never say that. He may be thinking something entirely different.’
It
took her a moment to realize that he was trying to give her another
document. She took it and recognized it at once, as his
will.
“I...left everything to you. Everything I own.
Everything I...am. Mac, you’re vital to my life. And I’ll
be damned if I’m going to wait 50 years to tell you what you
are to me. And that’s the truth. I don’t know what you
want to do with that information, but I just thought you should
know.”
‘Damned right I’m a Marine Colonel,
and I can leap like one.’ She braced her hands on his desk,
swung her legs to the side and was in his lap one leap later. His
mouth dropped open, his look of shock and awe was quickly overpowered
by a glowing grin, that was in turn wrestled to the ground by a
searing kiss.
“I think there’s something you
should know,” Mac whispered in his ear as she buried her face
in the crook of his neck. She kissed the soft skin and the tender
brush of the moment nearly brought her to tears. Harm’s hand,
that had been stroking circles on to the skin of her back, ceased.
“What is it?” He murmured against her hair.
“I
left everything to you. You are vital to my life. And I’ll be
damned if I’m not going to tell you what you are to me,
everyday for the next 50 years.”
She could feel him
smile, as he pulled her in, just a little closer. “I look
forward to it.”
End of scene? Good? Bad? Kinked Bowel?
Let me know.